My character Massie
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My character Massie
General information
Name: Massie Swift
Age: 12
Nickname: Mass
Persional Information
Personality: She is awesome.But doesn't like anyone much.Massie has a good attitude most of the time.She likes magic,spells and she hates most people and most preps.
History: Massie grew up in Hogmed and she had lots of friends but then she didn't have a bond with them because the matured faster than she did.And they were talking about other things Massie didn't like so they broke apart.And she got the letter for Hogwarts so shes going there.
Appearance Information
Height: 5'2
Weight: 100 lbs
Appearance: She has a Hogwarts uniform on and a wand.She has deep brown hair.She has ice blue eyes.And she has a locket
School Information
House: Griffendor
Year: 2nd year
Wand: The wood is oak.The core is made of unicorn hair and a owl feather,its 5 inches long.
Rank(s): A Hogwarts student
Spell Point: 2
RP Sample
RP Sample: Massie was walking thorough the halls of the Griffendor building with her 4 bags searching for her room.The she found her rooms sat her stuff down and went outside.It was her 2nd year at Hogwarts and she loved Hogwarts.
Name: Massie Swift
Age: 12
Nickname: Mass
Persional Information
Personality: She is awesome.But doesn't like anyone much.Massie has a good attitude most of the time.She likes magic,spells and she hates most people and most preps.
History: Massie grew up in Hogmed and she had lots of friends but then she didn't have a bond with them because the matured faster than she did.And they were talking about other things Massie didn't like so they broke apart.And she got the letter for Hogwarts so shes going there.
Appearance Information
Height: 5'2
Weight: 100 lbs
Appearance: She has a Hogwarts uniform on and a wand.She has deep brown hair.She has ice blue eyes.And she has a locket
School Information
House: Griffendor
Year: 2nd year
Wand: The wood is oak.The core is made of unicorn hair and a owl feather,its 5 inches long.
Rank(s): A Hogwarts student
Spell Point: 2
RP Sample
RP Sample: Massie was walking thorough the halls of the Griffendor building with her 4 bags searching for her room.The she found her rooms sat her stuff down and went outside.It was her 2nd year at Hogwarts and she loved Hogwarts.
Massie- Member
- Posts : 1
Points : 3
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2009-12-15
Age : 28
Re: My character Massie
You need one more line on your history and personality. You also need better grammar. Only one core, and you should say if it is strong, flimsy, etc. Put more on appearance, and your RP sample is kind of sloppy. If you could fix that as well, then you will have a MUCH better chance of being approved.
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