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Adrian shaddix

Post by Adrian on Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:32 pm

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Name: Adrian shaddix

Age: 13

Nickname: none

Persional Information

Personality: he is a kind person and cares more about other people then him self he will help any one that helps him and his friends. he just loves animals. so he is just a good guy that has done nothing to hert any one but will if forced to

History: Adrian was born into a wizarding family He studied magic at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and was sorted into the house of Ravenclaw. It is likely that he achieved a high graded O.W.L. and N.E.W.T. in Charms as later in his life he went on to teach this subject for over five years. At some point in his early life, Adrian
is a Master Duellist.


Appearance Information

Height: 4"9' foot

Weight: 105 lbs.

Appearance: this is what he is usally whereing
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and looks like this but older with a ravenclaw robe on

School Information

House: Ravenclaw

Year: starting 3th year at hogworts, i have went to school at hogworts for 2 years

[b]Wand: this wand is made of palm tree white wood raped tightly half way up with a lime green vines with a core of Phoenix feather and will be 111/2

Rank(s): 3rd year student

Additional Classes: none

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RP Sample:

Aaron dropped a small oval bead to the ground then it started to grow in to a large wolverine. It "roared" then looked at Jeremy and the person across from them. "so u need me to fight once again" the large wolverine said. "yes willda" Aaron said.

the guy across from them took out his Zanpaktou and started to charge at Wilda " you will not make it out of here a live bount"

"that is what u say... willda just be quick" willda charged at the guy and took a hold of the guy with her mouth and threw the guy up in to the air. Brought its paw in air and swatted the guy agents a tree

the guy was trembling with fear and ran to get more soul reapers. But when they got back the bount was gone.


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Re: Adrian shaddix

Post by Giera on Tue Dec 15, 2009 8:33 am

It is likely that he achieved a high graded O.W.L. and N.E.W.T. in Charms as later in his life he went on to teach this subject for over thirty years.
"Its likely that?" you might be the person who knows this stuff... anyways its not really that important.

He has teached this for thirty years, but is only 24? Your age doesnt match your year at hogwarts either ("Year: starting 10th year at hogworts have been head master for 3 and teached 3 years before that"). There are some spots, that just doesnt fit in.

As for your wand, i would like you to write a proposal, if we find its not suiting your char we will make one that does. We cant make wands constantly if the site is to grow, too much work.

Nice RP, but we dont know if its you who made it since its from another site, you couldve just copy/pasted a nice RP from someone elses char on some other site. I dont belive you did, but many others would, and i dont want noobs running around saying "But he could use an RP from another site, why cant I?"

Yes you can be headmaster of Ravenclaw, ill make sure you get in as soon as your approved ^^
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Post by Adrian on Tue Dec 15, 2009 3:16 pm

ok sorry u cot me on the rp sample sorry just thought it would work but i can get one that i used before on another site. would that work for yeah?

as for the years sorry i had change my age after righting the history

and thank u for not banning me for that
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Re: Adrian shaddix

Post by Kalina on Tue Dec 15, 2009 5:12 pm

Can you change the name? I don't want any playbys.
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Post by Adrian on Tue Dec 15, 2009 5:22 pm

ok i will
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Post by Giera on Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:09 am

dont thank me for not banning you ^^

Year: starting 10th year at hogworts have been head master for 3 and teached 3 years before that

That part dont matches the rest if he has only been teaching for five years

Your wands apperance looks fine, (wish id found that picture ._.), but i cannot approve the wand itself. First off, Vines? that is not a very good material for making a wand. secondly, you cant have the core of a phoenix feather, since there was only made 2, and they belong to Harry and Voldemort. Allowing you this would simple crush the whole story, sorry... Your gonna have to write this:

Wand: A fine rustique 11½ inch long wand, made of 2 different chestnut trees in each their color. The core contains traces of dragon tears, but is mainly dowfeathers. A strange combination, but works perfectly together in the right hands.

The RPsample, it would really be great if you could make one for this site, of the same reasons as before
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Post by Adrian on Wed Dec 16, 2009 5:32 pm

well i was in the school to so the rest means i was in school for four years of corse and harminie grainer has a vine wand i looked up materials online and acuely i can give u the site and my sign in name and password if you would like for that and see that my email is on that name
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Post by Kalina on Wed Dec 16, 2009 5:46 pm

Giera... That isn't the story of the phoenix feathers. A lot of people have Phoenix Feather wands, but the hpoenix that gave the feathers to Harry and Voldamort's wands, Faux, only gave two.
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Post by Adrian on Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:57 pm

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Post by Kalina on Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:01 pm

Denied! Due to sloppy RP Sample. You must wait 24 hours before you may edit you character, and seek approval from Admins or Mods. This topic shall be locked for 24 hours.
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Re: Adrian shaddix

Post by Giera on Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:33 am

Neville... Make an RPsample, and youll get approved. I know its dull and hard some times, but as soon as its done you can begin. I dont see why you try to sneak around it all the time
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Post by Ellie on Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:59 am

Year: starting 10th year at hogworts have been head master for 3 and teached 3 years before that and went to school at hogworts for 4 years

Use some good grammar, your skipping a few things >.<

And its Head of Ravenclaw not Headmaster.. Or likely HoH of Ravenclaw..

Sorry i'm fussy with stuff like that..

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Post by Adrian on Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:24 am

ok Kalina said that one is good she told me her self and sorry about headmaster thing
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Post by Ellie on Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:43 pm

Oh Ok XD

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Post by Giera on Sat Dec 19, 2009 3:42 pm

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